'The Score' - Script
Scene 1
Danny and Jake are having a cigarette outside Danny's house, Mikey is standing with them.
Danny: Boys, you wanna make some money?
Jake: Nah bruv, i ain't robbin' Charlie again..
Mikey: yeah it's gettin' a bit peak now
Danny: Not even....C'mon he's the biggest sop goin.. and i need money you know
Mikey: I've got a better idea anyway bruv
Danny: If you say L.B one more time, im gonna drop you bruv
(Laughs)
Jake: Come on Danny, he's a bitch, you know he snitched on you!
Danny: Dont chat shit bruv! He would't do that...
Mikey: Don't be naive then bruv, you know it as well as us
(Softer voice)
Danny: You know if he catches us, we're dead right?
Jake: Look bruv, in, out, we ain’t gettin’ caught, let’s just go inside and plan it out, we’ve done it a million times before, it’s no different this time except for the fact that it’s L.B we’re robbin’
They all walk in to the house
Scene 2
All three boys are sat around the dining room table, discussing ways in which they can get away with their crime
Danny: so boys, if we’re gonna do this, we gotta do it right, we can’t get caught coz he will go mad
Jake: Danny… he’s gonna know that his money’s gone missing, it ain’t nothin’ small, it’s 20 big ones at the end of the day… that’s more than 6 and a half each man! Anyways you’re first suspect in any case…
Danny: Yeah... good way to convince me bruv
Jake: let me finish then you divvy.. like I was saying, he’s gonna know it was you.. but wheres the proof bruv?
Mikey: How about we stop talkin about how we’re gonna get caught and figure out how not to get caught yeah?
(Sighs and rolls eyes)
Danny: Right so this is how we do it.
Goes in to a cut scene with Danny narrating over the top
Scene 3 (cut scene)
Mikey and Jake tap on Danny’s Danny: Mikey, you're gonna go to the
window, now wearing all black window...It will be open but be quiet
clothing and balaclavas.
They open it and and we go from there. First you're gonna
climb in. They then creep through have to get through the living room, that
Danny’s living room, doing over the shouldn't be a problem coz...well you ain't
top ‘spy movie’ movements such as, mongs.
rolliepollie’s and dramatically hiding
behind things.
Danny: Can you boys not just zip it for like, one second?
Back to the "heist"
Danny: You two gotta get up the stairs, again they're creeky so be quiet, when you get upstairs, you know which room it is Mike, so go in, and under his mattress is an envolope...it's in there
Mikey: Then we don't get it, obviously
Danny: It's there, don't worry
Dining room table
Mikey: Can i make a suggestion?
Danny: Yeah, but i bet your bit of the money that we won't use it
(Punches Danny's arm)
Mikey: Prick, nah, i reckon if it goes tits up we go out his window
Jake: Nah his yard ain't even that hard to get out of
Danny: Boys we ain't robbin' the fuckin' Queen, you go out the way you came in.
Danny, Mikey and Jake are walking out the front door with a big bag (seemingly full)
(They all fist bump eachother)
24 hours later (The real thing)
(They commit the robbery and things go wrong, Luke catches them)
Luke: Right,names. Now.
(calmly)
Mikey: I'm Lewis
(Panicked)
Jake: Uhm, I. I. uh My names uhm-
Luke: Shut up, whats your name?
Jake: Jake..
Mikey: I actually am Lewis
(Holding back laughter)
(Grabs Mikey)
Luke: Tell me your name right now or I'll make sure you can't ever say your name again you little shit!
(Now panicked)
Mikey: It's Mikey, I'm Mikey!
Luke: Right, and i can assume you're here because of...Danny?
(Mikey and Jake look at eachother)
(Slowly walks towards them)
(Quietly)
Luke: You tell Danny, I'm telling mum, and she's gonna ground him, now turn around and get out of my house
(They go to walk away)
Luke: Wait..Tell him his XBOX is mine too.
NJO - Great first draft Joe. Look through the comments on the document for more feedback. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eyA6OVP97lzyyCObD4qGIl-8807xLatJ2G0r0POKYHY/edit?usp=sharing
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